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 <h1>Community: Donations</h1>
 
 <a href="http://www.ossp.org/">OSSP</a> is a fully non-profit <a
-href="http://www.opensource.org/">Open Source Software</a> project with
-the goal of implementing high-quality Unix software components for use
-in the Unix Open Source community. It puts really a lot of private work
-on its idealistic developers, but nevertheless makes all of its results
-freely available to the interested public. Without sponsoring through
-donations from the individuals and companies all this would be not
-possible, of course.
+href="http://www.opensource.org/">Open Source Software</a> project. It
+aims to implement high quality Unix component software for use in the
+Unix Open Source community. OSSP takes a lot of private work and its
+idealistic developers bear this burden. Nevertheless, the fruits of
+this collaborative effort are freely shared with the interested public.
+Without sponsorship through donations from individuals and companies
+this would be not possible, of course.
 
 <p>
-You can sponsor the project by online donating money (see below) to the
-<a href="http://www.ossp.org/">OSSP</a> project. Every sponsor will be
-added to our <a href="sponsors.html"><b>Sponsors</b></a> page under one
-of the following three cathegories, depending on the total amount of
-money donation:
+You can sponsor the <a href="http://www.ossp.org/">OSSP</a> project by
+donating money online. Every sponsor will be added to our
+<a href="sponsors.html"><b>Sponsors</b></a> page under one of the
+following three categories, depending on the total amount donated:
 
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 <p>
 We use the <a href="http://www.paypal.com/"><b>PayPal</b></a> service
-for secure online money transactions to us. Perform your money
-transaction online now by pressing the button above. If you want your
-donation to be anonymous then please put the word "<tt>anonymous</tt>"
-somewhere in the notes with your donation. If you would like to make
-a larger corporate donation (gold sponsoring) then we would certainly
-like to discuss that with you first. Please send a email to <a
-href="mailto:ossp-donation@ossp.org">ossp-donation@ossp.org</a> to talk
-to us.
+for secure online money transactions. To perform a money transaction
+online now, press the button above. To remain anonymous following your
+donation, put the word "<tt>anonymous</tt>" somewhere in the
+transaction's notes. We invite you to make a larger corporate donation
+(gold sponsoring) as well, but would like to discuss it with you first.
+Please send a email to <a href="mailto:ossp-donation@ossp.org">
+ossp-donation@ossp.org</a> to talk to us.